Monday, October 5, 2009

Sentence 6

His sentence:

A man might work and feed himself; and when the work was done, he might find that he owed money to the company.
by John Steinbeck in Grapes of Wrath

A complex sentence that tells a short story in sequence and the structure contrasts working but owing money.

My sentence:

The children might laugh and play; and when they come back inside, they find that they have more energy than when they left.

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